導語：奧數網給同學們匯總了小學英語作文范文及點評，希望同學們的英語學習有所幫助。以下為范文原文：

　　Today, I learn a lesson about love. The story tells about a man and his wife live the poor life, but when Christmas comes, they want to give present to each other. The man sells his watch and the wife cuts her hair. When they see the things they have done for each other, they feel very touched. It is the most precious gift and it is about love.

　　今天,我上了一節關于愛的課。這個故事講述一個男人和他的妻子過著窮人的生活,但是當圣誕節來臨的時候,他們想給對方禮物。男人賣了他的手表，妻子剪了她的頭發。當他們看到各自為對方所做的事情時,非常感動。這是最珍貴的禮物,關于愛的禮物。